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[ ja.]

SWEPT TO SHORE

WAVES
ROLLiNG
WENT
ALONG
SWEPT AWAY
OPENED UP
MY HEART
LAYED BARE
WiTHOUT SHELTER
NO HURRAY
WOUNDED
LEFT
FOR GOOD
TUMBLiNG FUN
WENT ON
SWEPT
TO SHORE
GONE
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#158
your opinion?
i'm curious.
[ ja.]
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  1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

    Great! Congratulations! I’m looking forward to it!

  2. ben Alexander

    hi, Svenja 😄

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by li’l ol‘ me, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/05/14/w3-prompt-159-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

  3. wlknlr.wolkenleer

    Thank you David!

  4. ben Alexander

    Svenja, this feels raw and exposed in the best way. You’ve captured the motion of being carried and discarded with stunning restraint.

    ~David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      As always your response is much appreciated and insightful. Thank you so much David.

      1. ben Alexander

        🤗

  5. Violet Lentz

    Your point came through loud and clear. Sometimes recovery is a way to show strength.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      It certainly is!

  6. murisopsis

    A very wonderful waltz wave! Introspection can be painful and healing at the same time!

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you so much!
      The form was new to me but so much fun!

  7. wlknlr.wolkenleer

    Thank you, Suzanne! To write in English gives me another layer to distance myself, to get a more intimate pictures for the emotions. But it also holds the possibility to use words the wrong way, to not getting it right or on point. But I can say I love it!
    All the best!

  8. brazannemuse

    The powerful waves can turn and sweep anything to shore … I am so pleased you have enjoyed playing with this poetry form. I so admire you for writing poetry in a language that is not your first… to speak another language is strength 💞Suzanne