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[ ja.]

PHASED iN

SKY HiGH AND DOWN BELOW
ALL i SEE: THE MARKS
iS THiS A YEAR THAT ASKS
OR ONE REPOSiNG iN THE FLOW?
THROUGH THE CLOUDS, A PERSPECTiVE ViEW
NEiTHER LAUGHTER, TWiNKLiNG STARS
HUMANS LEAVE MORE OFTEN SCARS
SELDOM FAR-FLUNG PRECiOSiTiES - FEW 
HOPiNG FOR A YEAR THAT ANSWERS
AT LAST RELEASiNG PENT-UP QUESTiONS
GAiNiNG CONFiDENCE AND TRACTiONS
TO STEP OUT OF LiNE OF PHASED iN DANCERS

In my poem I used and modified two lines from Zora Neale Hurston and John Green.

„There are years that ask questions and years that answer.“
from
„Their Eyes Were Watching God“

Zora Neale Hurston (1891-1960)

„The marks humans leave are too often scars.“
from
„The Fault in Our Stars“

John Green (b. 1977)
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#148
your opinion?
i'm curious.
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  2. wlknlr.wolkenleer

    I’m looking forward to it!

  3. ben Alexander

    hi, Svenja 😁

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Murisopsis, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #149: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      LOOKING FORWARD TO IT!

      1. ben Alexander

        *hug*

  4. ben Alexander

    Svenja, your poem captures both uncertainty and release so well. The blend of Hurston and Green’s lines adds rich emotional depth.

    Much love,
    David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you so much! 🥰

      1. ben Alexander

        🤗 🤗 🤗

  5. murisopsis

    Very nicely done!

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you!

  6. Violet Lentz

    I love the ending, and I hope you are right. I hope this is the year we gain enough confidence to step out, get traction and actually DO something to put an end to the things that are making everyone fearful and angry.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      I hope so as well!