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SOME MOMENT iN TiME

OUT OF NOWHERE, A SURPRiSiNG MOMENT
CAN CATAPULT ONE BACK iNTO THE MOMENT 

ONE LiTTLE TEENY TiNY THiNG
CAN CAPTURE AN EYE iN THE BLiNK OF A MOMENT
 
A TiCKLiNG SPARK ALONG THE SKiN
DiFFERENTiATE THiS FROM A COMMON MOMENT 

A GLOWiNG PRiCKLE RUNNiNG THROUGH THE VEiNS 
HiGHLiGHT iT AS A TRULY A SPECiAL MOMENT
 
WHAT WOULD, WHAT COULD TEASE
TO TRANSFORM COMMONNESS iNTO AN OUTSTANDiNG MOMENT? 

THiS WiLL DiFFER FROM PERSON TO PERSON
TREASURE TROVES MAY BE FiND EVEN iN AN ABSTRUSE MOMENT 

ALL i KNOW LUV, BE AWARE TO CATCH THE SiGNS
BECAUSE LOVE FOR OR iN LiES iN SUCH PRECiOUS GEMS OF A MOMENT
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#147
your opinion?
i'm curious.
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  2. ben Alexander

    hi, Svenja 🙂

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted for the first time by the wonderful Violet Lentz, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #148: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you! I will!

      1. ben Alexander

        *HUG*

  3. leendadll

    I like this! Plus I learned „abtruse“.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      I’m glad you like it!

  4. murisopsis

    A lovely poem but definitely not a ghazal…. but still a poem with vivid images!

  5. ben Alexander

    Svenja, this poem feels wonderfully reflective and attuned to the fleeting magic of experience. For me the repetition of “moment” creates a rhythmic pull that makes each line feel like a ripple in time.

    Much love,
    David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you David! As always your response goes straight to my heart.
      I found this form a little bit tricky, but in the end it was a special experience.
      So thans again!
      Svenja