A lovely poem but definitely not a ghazal…. but still a poem with vivid images!
ben Alexander
Svenja, this poem feels wonderfully reflective and attuned to the fleeting magic of experience. For me the repetition of “moment” creates a rhythmic pull that makes each line feel like a ripple in time.
Much love, David
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Thank you David! As always your response goes straight to my heart.
I found this form a little bit tricky, but in the end it was a special experience.
So thans again!
Svenja
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hi, Svenja :-)
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted for the first time by the wonderful Violet Lentz, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/02/26/w3-prompt-148-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
Thank you! I will!
*HUG*
I like this! Plus I learned „abtruse“.
I’m glad you like it!
A lovely poem but definitely not a ghazal…. but still a poem with vivid images!
Svenja, this poem feels wonderfully reflective and attuned to the fleeting magic of experience. For me the repetition of “moment” creates a rhythmic pull that makes each line feel like a ripple in time.
Much love,
David
Thank you David! As always your response goes straight to my heart.
I found this form a little bit tricky, but in the end it was a special experience.
So thans again!
Svenja