MY iNSiDE'S BURNiNG HOT HOT WiTH HEAVY PAiNFUL CRAMPS CRAMPS LOCKED SO DEEP THEY LEAD LEAD TO TUMULTUOUS PENT-UP THEWS THEWS WHiCH RUN THE RiSK RiSK TO BECOME AN OVERWHELMiNG FLOOD FLOOD
ALREADY, iT'S BEEN A YEAR YEAR GONE BY BY iN A BLiNK OF AN EYE i HAVEN'T HAD THE PLACE AND TiME TiME TO EMBRACE THE FLOOD FLOOD MY EYES WiTHOUT WATERS BURNiNG HOT HOT
i DO NOT KNOW WHY WHY MY EYES STAY DRY DRY LiKE THE DESERT WHiCH WiLL CRAVE CRAVE TEARS SHOULD BE SHED AND CRiED CRiED ABOUT MY SORROW AND MY GRiEF GRiEF A FLOOD LOCKED UP SO BURNiNG HOT HOT
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W3 Prompt #147: Wea’ve Written Weekly – The Skeptic's Kaddish 🇮🇱
[…] ‘BURNiNG HOT’, by Svenja […]
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[…] poem was inspired by this week’s W3 prompt. This week’s Poet of the Week, Svenja, prompts us to write a poem to encourage someone not to give up—urging them to persevere, try […]
Nicole Horlings
This is a well written, emotionally intense poem, Svenja! The echo form worked so well for it. Congrats on becoming PoW!
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Thank you for your kind words! To be choosen as PoW means really a lot. It lets me blushing. ☺️
paeansunplugged
So intense and raw, Svenja. Sometimes we desperately want to cry but are unable to do so.
Congratulations on being chosen the POW. So well deserved. ❤️
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Thank you so much! 🥰
It is quiet diturbing if you want to let go of emotions and are unable or afraid to do so.
You taking time to read and comment means a lot!
paeansunplugged
You are very welcome. 🥰
You are so right. I’ve been in such a situation and know it too well.
My pleasure actually though I am usually late in catching up.
brazannemuse
I feel this deep, raw burning… I have been there, felt this… congratulations on well deserved POW
💞Suzanne
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Thank you so much! I was quiet surprised.
SelmaMartin
Most touching piece of writing. And like that precious vase I see posted on IG I hope the mending of your inner vase is on the mend in like fashion.
This is tremendously lovely my friend. Congratulations. 🎉 my soul sees your soul. My soul embraces it too. Be well
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Selma, thank you for your kind words. It’s certainly helpful to find words to express what’s going on inside the soul, head and heart. And the knowledge, that there are others out there who can relate helps in an other way.
And thanks for taking the time to read and comment. This means a lot!
W3 Prompt #146: Wea’ve Written Weekly – The Skeptic's Kaddish 🇮🇱
[…] ‘BURNiNG HOT’, by Svenja […]
ben Alexander
This feels so raw and intense, Svenja. The repetition amplifies the overwhelming emotions beautifully.
Much love, David
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Thank you David! And it is certainly a hard subject at the moment. Mourning is a individual process that has no right or wrong but it has all the hard emotions packed together.
ben Alexander
could you please send me an email? I don’t have yours.
here’s mine:
DVDBGMLNY at GMAIL dot COM
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Certainly!
sgeoil
The echo form works well at showing the depth of the sadness in your poem.
wlknlr.wolkenleer
🙏 Thank you for taking the time to read and respond.
sgeoil
My pleasure.
murisopsis
Bravo! Nicely done!!
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Thank you!
Violet Lentz
I feel a sense of despair in these words. Almost as if you did allow yourself to cry, pressure would be relieved. This is a hard form to work with. Bravo!
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Despair is quiet right. To be able to acknowledge loss and sadness is something I struggle with.
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[…] ‘BURNiNG HOT’, by Svenja […]
[…] Svenja’s prompt guidelines […]
[…] was beautiful attributed to Glenn Martin Taylor For this week’s W3 #146, the Poet of the Week, Svenja has challenged us to write a poem to encourage someone not to give up—urging them to persevere, […]
[…] poem is in response to Svenja’s prompt on the Skeptic’s Kaddish, W3 Prompt #146, in which we are challenged to “Write a […]
[…] for PoW-Svenja’s prompt for W3 for Wednesday, 12thPlease read Svenja’s winning poem: ‘BURNiNG HOT’, by […]
[…] poem was inspired by this week’s W3 prompt. This week’s Poet of the Week, Svenja, prompts us to write a poem to encourage someone not to give up—urging them to persevere, try […]
This is a well written, emotionally intense poem, Svenja! The echo form worked so well for it. Congrats on becoming PoW!
Thank you for your kind words! To be choosen as PoW means really a lot. It lets me blushing. ☺️
So intense and raw, Svenja. Sometimes we desperately want to cry but are unable to do so.
Congratulations on being chosen the POW. So well deserved. ❤️
Thank you so much! 🥰
It is quiet diturbing if you want to let go of emotions and are unable or afraid to do so.
You taking time to read and comment means a lot!
You are very welcome. 🥰
You are so right. I’ve been in such a situation and know it too well.
My pleasure actually though I am usually late in catching up.
I feel this deep, raw burning… I have been there, felt this… congratulations on well deserved POW
💞Suzanne
Thank you so much! I was quiet surprised.
Most touching piece of writing. And like that precious vase I see posted on IG I hope the mending of your inner vase is on the mend in like fashion.
This is tremendously lovely my friend. Congratulations. 🎉 my soul sees your soul. My soul embraces it too. Be well
Selma, thank you for your kind words. It’s certainly helpful to find words to express what’s going on inside the soul, head and heart. And the knowledge, that there are others out there who can relate helps in an other way.
And thanks for taking the time to read and comment. This means a lot!
[…] ‘BURNiNG HOT’, by Svenja […]
This feels so raw and intense, Svenja. The repetition amplifies the overwhelming emotions beautifully.
Much love,
David
Thank you David! And it is certainly a hard subject at the moment. Mourning is a individual process that has no right or wrong but it has all the hard emotions packed together.
could you please send me an email? I don’t have yours.
here’s mine:
DVDBGMLNY at GMAIL dot COM
Certainly!
The echo form works well at showing the depth of the sadness in your poem.
🙏 Thank you for taking the time to read and respond.
My pleasure.
Bravo! Nicely done!!
Thank you!
I feel a sense of despair in these words. Almost as if you did allow yourself to cry, pressure would be relieved. This is a hard form to work with. Bravo!
Despair is quiet right. To be able to acknowledge loss and sadness is something I struggle with.
Thank you for your kind words!