FOREST’S HUE

LiGHT FiLTERiNG THROUGH
WiTHOUT DiRECTiON
LiKE FiNGERTiPS SEARCHiNG FOR A CLUE
BAFFLEMENT SHAKiNG YOUR CONViCTiON
TWiNKLiNG WHiLE THEY DO
SEEN iN YOUR EYES REFLECTiON
ON DROPLETS MADE FROM DEW
HELPLESS HUNTiNG FOR PERFECTiON
LOOSiNG THEMSELF WiTHOUT CUE
ALiENATiNG THiS CONNECTiON
TRAVELLiNG DEEPER iNTO AREAS REAL NEW
FEARFUL, WiLL THERE BE REJECTiON
ENCHANTED FROM THE FORESTS HUE
FiNDiNG PURPOSE THROUGH AFFECTiON
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#128

your opinion?
i'm curious.

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  2. PebbleGalaxy

    Its strong imagery and thematic depth are ccommendable.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you so much!

  3. judeitakali

    Beautifully written✨✍

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thanj you so much!

  4. lesleyscoble

    A fascinating poetic fantasy, Svenja. I enjoyed this enormously 💚🌳

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      This means a lot! I’m really happy you like it! Thanks so much!

      1. lesleyscoble

        🙏🩷 xx

  5. murisopsis

    Well done! The rhyme was a delight to read!!

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Oh, thank you! I’m happy you like it!

  6. crazy4yarn2

    Very nice!

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you!

  7. leendadll

    I like this – but I wanted on last „B“ rhyme.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      The lenghts of the poem is due to the guidelines provided through the writing promt W3 #128. So, sorry. No last „B“ rhyme.

      1. leendadll

        I call SHENANIGANS! Not really, but I love saying that!

      2. wlknlr.wolkenleer

        🤣