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murisopsis
Powerfully written!!
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Thank you so much!
byngnigel
hope keeps us going. A very heavy, poignant piece. Some days can be like this. Here’s looking forward to brighter days. 🙏
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Yes, hope carries us forward. Day after day. Thank you for taken the time for reading and responding.
byngnigel
You’re welcome
Sarah W
Wonderfully written 👏🏻
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Thank you! This means a lot!
lesleyscoble
The poignancy in this poem is palpable. It is dark and heartrending. I hope in the future you may expand your poem and write another stanza where the window opens… Thank you for responding to my prompt. 🙏
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Thank you for your kind words. It was ny pleasure to respond to your prompt, even when my lines are on the darker side. Giving those feelings an outlet in writing is key for me. And yes, maybe another window will open…who knows?
paeansunplugged
Some days can be rough but there is always hope! A poignant verse.
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Thank you for your kind words. Yes, hope remains.
paeansunplugged
You are welcome.
leendadll
I found you through wo’s Discover feature but am a big fan of Skeptic’s Kaddish!
Ireally like this piece.
wlknlr.wolkenleer
I’m happy and greatful you found me! And I like to participate in the W3 hosted by David! It’s always a challenge.
Stine Writing and Miniatures
Sounds like mornings are rough! I hope this isn’t every day!
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Yeah, they are. At the moment. Time will tell, I’m not giving up hope.
Thanks for taking time to read and respond.
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Powerfully written!!
Thank you so much!
hope keeps us going. A very heavy, poignant piece. Some days can be like this. Here’s looking forward to brighter days. 🙏
Yes, hope carries us forward. Day after day. Thank you for taken the time for reading and responding.
You’re welcome
Wonderfully written 👏🏻
Thank you! This means a lot!
The poignancy in this poem is palpable. It is dark and heartrending. I hope in the future you may expand your poem and write another stanza where the window opens… Thank you for responding to my prompt. 🙏
Thank you for your kind words. It was ny pleasure to respond to your prompt, even when my lines are on the darker side. Giving those feelings an outlet in writing is key for me. And yes, maybe another window will open…who knows?
Some days can be rough but there is always hope! A poignant verse.
Thank you for your kind words. Yes, hope remains.
You are welcome.
I found you through wo’s Discover feature but am a big fan of Skeptic’s Kaddish!
Ireally like this piece.
I’m happy and greatful you found me! And I like to participate in the W3 hosted by David! It’s always a challenge.
Sounds like mornings are rough! I hope this isn’t every day!
Yeah, they are. At the moment. Time will tell, I’m not giving up hope.
Thanks for taking time to read and respond.