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[ ja.]

9.|DEZ|2024

Welcome to my written
ADVENTS-CALENDER
Each day will bring a new part to this little poem.
Have fun!

be curious.

iN DECEMBER

iT'S BECOMiNG CRYSTAL CLEAR
SOON iT WiLL BE HERE
THE END OF ANOTHER GONE-BYE YEAR

iS ALL THAT'S LEFT, JUST GLOWiNG EMBER?
AT THE END OF THiS DECEMBER
TELL ME, WHAT WiLL WE REMEMBER?

WiLL THERE BE TEARS LiKE FALLiNG SNOW?
FOR LOVED ONE'S LOST iN THE TiMELESS FLOW
THEN COLLECT YOUR MEMORiES TO LET THEM GLOW
your opinion?
i'm curious.
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  1. leendadll

    Should it be „then“, or did you mean to use than?

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Oh, thank you! It should be then. You are right! I will change it!

      1. leendadll

        Yay… I was concerned that my comprehension was failing! Now delete this thread.

      2. wlknlr.wolkenleer

        There will always be moments where it will br quiet obvious that I’m not a native speaker of the English language. So mistakes are bound to happen. No need to Cover them up!

      3. leendadll

        Well, I’m a native speaker but type on a phone, using 1 finger… typos everywhere!!