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OCEAN
A STORM WiLL PASS
AND QUiET BEFORE THE STORM
MOViNG iN WAVES - SWELL AFTER SWELL
GROOViNG
A WASTELAND iN BLUE
RiPPLES, LAYiNG FLAT, ENDLESS
EYESiGHT'S CALMiNG HUE
A short lyrical impression about the ocean, infinity, and the yearning heart. This poem combined a cinquain and a haiku to something new.
Serie: [ SEELEN|TEXT.] straight from the heart.
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#213
your opinion?
i'm curious.
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hi, Svenja❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Artie, is now live until Monday:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2026/06/10/w3-prompt-215-weave-written-weekly/
Much love, David
looking forward to it!
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hi, Svenja❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Deanna, is live until Monday:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2026/06/03/w3-prompt-214-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
looking forward to it!
🤗
Svenja, this is a vivid description of the ocean -both color and movement!
Thank you for taking the time to response. All the best Svenja
Svenja, I really love how “MOViNG iN WAVES – SWELL AFTER SWELL” makes your whole poem feel like the ocean itself is breathing and rolling forward 🌊
~David
David, thank you for your kind words!
„A wasteland in blue“ is so evocative.
Thank you for your kind response and for taking the time as well.
You are welcome always.
PERFECTiON, THE FORMS SELECTED WORKED BRiLLiANTLY. GOOD JOB! 😘
Oh, thank you so much! 🥰