iN A NO, MY, PERFECT WORLD ALL i DiD WAS PRACTiCE ART THOSE WHO DiD WOULD EVEN BE CONSiDERED SMART JUST FLiNGiNG COLORS WHEN THOUGHTS WHiRLED
i HAD NO NEED TO BE SMART MY SURROUNDiNGS WOULD BE CLEAR OF TROUBLE, AGGRESSiON, AND FEAR NOTHiNG COULD OR WOULD TEAR ME APART
i LiVED FULFiLLED WiTHOUT SHAME AND FEAR COULD EXPRESS EVEN MY DARKEST, HiDDEN DESiRE AND iF i WANTED, i'D SET MY SHEETS ON FiRE iNTiMACY NOT ELUSiVE BUT HELD DEAR
MY iMAGiNATiON WiLL NOT FULLY FiRE i'M TOO ROOTED iN THE HERE AND NOW TO FANTASiZE ABOUT UTOPiA, i DON'T KNOW HOW PLEASE, FOR UTOPiAN iDEAS, YOU'LL HAVE SOMEONE ELSE TO HiRE
A poem about hidden desires of a world without fear and with possibilities to express oneself freely.
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Great take.
Thank you so much!
You are welcome, Ja.
hi, Svenja❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Dawn, is live until Monday:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2026/05/06/w3-prompt-210-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
Thanks David! Trying to find the time to participate!
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Svenja, I like how “just flinging colors when thoughts whirled” shows art as a free way to let your feelings out.
~David
David, thank you! I’m convinced art is a superb way to express emotions and handle feelings. So let’s create!
*hug*
Haha! I loved your ending, Svenja! Awesome poem! Thank you for participating this week!
Yvette M Calleiro :-)
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Thank you Yvette! I’m happy you like it as I found the imagination of an utopia quiet difficult.
It’s hard to imagine a utopia with all that is happening, but I think you did great with the prompt. :-)
Again, thank you so much!