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Baumwipfel ohne Laub vor blauem Himmel.
[ ja.]

A BREEZE

DARK
LOGiC RULES
ALL THE WiT
TRiCK BY TRiCK BY
SiCK
DARK
EMOTiONS LiNGER
MOCKED, PUT OFF
SHiVERiNG, SCRATCHiNG, DEATH-LiKE
FiNGERS
DARK
A BREEZE
SOMETHiNG RiDES ALONG
FRiSSON; COLORS POOL ANEW
GLiMMER
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#205
your opinion?
i'm curious.
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  1. PiCTURE|PERFECT 04/26 – [ ja.].

    […] ONE BUT TWO A BREEZE WHY, OH WHY PERSONAL PHOENiX SEE ME TWiTCH LOViNGLY iMMER DiESE UNRUHE STRENGTH STRANDTAG SCULPTED […]

  2. shaun tenzenmen

    For some reason your poem brought this song to mind:

    https://youtu.be/fvn4CeaJp_s?si=ne_fG5pi5nWRvptZ

    1. [ ja.]

      How truly entertaining! Thank you so much for this inspiration! Really, much appreciated!

  3. ben Alexander

    hi, Svenja❣️

    This week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Nigel, will be live until next Monday (April 13):

    W3 Prompt #206: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy 🙃

    Much love,
    David

    1. [ ja.]

      looking forward to it!

      1. ben Alexander

        🤗

  4. ben Alexander

    Svenja, the shift to “FRiSSON; COLORS POOL ANEW” feels like something opening up after all that darkness, which I find really striking.

    ~David

    1. [ ja.]

      David, thank you! This hint of possibility was what I were looking for.

  5. writingwhatnots

    I love how the breeze blows away the negative, and brings in a brighter perspective. Great writing, Svenja.

    1. [ ja.]

      Thank you so much! It is quiet scary when the colors fail to exist. So, in my experience, a breeze which brings just an idea of color back is more than welcome. 🥰

  6. murisopsis

    This has an eerie quality to it!!!

    1. [ ja.]

      Oh! That wasn’t my intention but I can certainly see why you think so. Isn’t that the beauty of writing? How the written words may transport different meanings. So, I celebrate the eerieness (is this even a word?)!

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