i WONDER

iT'S EARLY AND iT'S DARK, DARK
i WONDER HOW THEY KNOW, KNOW
TO BE ABOUT AND START, START
A CONVERSATiON WiTH A FLOW, FLOW
i HEAR THEiR UNiNHiBiTED TWiTTER, TWiTTER
BANiSHiNG THOUGHTS THAT TASTE SO BiTTER, BiTTER
WHiLE i LiSTEN, WARMTH BEGiNS TO GROW, GROW
SETTLiNG iN MY iCE-COLD HEART, HEART
A BEAT TO THAW THE SNOW, SNOW
WELCOME THE HERALD WiTH THE SPARK, SPARK
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#201

your opinion?
i'm curious.

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  2. ben Alexander

    hi, Svenja❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Nancy, is now live until Monday, Mar. 16:

    W3 Prompt #202: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Much love,
    David

  3. ben Alexander

    Svenja, this feels very quiet and reflective to me.

    The moment where the birds’ “twitter” begins “banishing thoughts that taste so bitter” especially stands out to me!

    ~David

    1. [ ja.]

      David, as always I really appreciate your insideful response. Thank you!

      1. ben Alexander

        🤗

  4. Stine Writing and Miniatures

    Nice writing!

    1. [ ja.]

      Thank you! 🥰 Am happy you like it!

  5. Elizabeth

    Yes, I wonder… love the lightness in this poem!

    1. [ ja.]

      Oh, thank you! 🥰

  6. Indira

    Nice take.

    1. [ ja.]

      Thank you so much!

      1. Indira

        ❤❤

  7. O’Nika

    Great echo poem! ‚Banishing thoughts that taste so bitter-warmth starts to grow‘. Thank you for joining in.

    1. [ ja.]

      Thank you! I loved the prompt!

  8. murisopsis

    Nice…

    1. [ ja.]

      🥰