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iMBEDDED

AT TiMES, A MEMORY'LL SURFACE
SPARKED TO LiFE WiTHOUT HASTE
AWAiTS
MY HEARTRATE SPiKES, STARTS A RACE
TRiGGERS MY LOViNG TASTE
CREATES

EVEN LOST iN THE COURSE OF TiME
iMBEDDED iN MY SOUL
A CLUE
MY ANCHOR, GiVES ME TRUTH AND RHYME
YOUR LOViNG MADE ME WHOLE
ANEW
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  9. lesleyscoble

    Fabulous poem, Svenja. Congratulations on being poet of the week. So well deserved. 👏👏👏 The rhythm of your words is wonderful.

    1. [ ja.]

      Dear Lesley, thank you so much! I’m really moved to be the poet of the week and I hope we will see a lot of wonderful poems!

      1. lesleyscoble

        🤗💖xxx

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    1. [ ja.]

      Thank you! I’m looking forward to all the written treasures!

  11. ben Alexander

    This really works for me, Svenja. “my heartrate spikes, starts a race” feels so alive and familiar, and I think “made me whole / anew” lands softly, with a lot of care in it.

    ~David

    1. [ ja.]

      Your kind words regarding my contribution to the last W3 means really a lot, David. I’m really touched that it sparked recognition in you.

      1. ben Alexander

        *Drücker*

  12. ben Alexander

    Hi, Svenja! <3

    Mazal tov! Marion has selected as our Poet of the Week (PoW) for W3 this week; I’ve emailed you with „next steps“.

    If you haven’t received an email from me (sometimes my emails end up in people’s spam folders), please email me directly at:

    DVDBGMLNY at GMAIL dot COM

    ~David

    1. [ ja.]

      I’m honored to be chosen. 😊 And I got your Mail. I will answer you later today.

      1. ben Alexander

        🤗

  13. murisopsis

    Very nicely done!! Bravo!!

    1. [ ja.]

      Thank you so much! 🥰

  14. Kaci Rigney


    beautifully written .

    1. [ ja.]

      Thank you so much!

  15. writingwhatnots

    A beautiful memento love song.

    1. [ ja.]

      Thank you so much 🥰

      1. writingwhatnots

        Hi Svenja,

        I have chosen you as the next Poet of the Week. Congrats!

        Marion. x

      2. [ ja.]

        Wow! Thank you so much Marion! I’m really honored.

  16. Violet Lentz


    It is my hope that everyone get to experience this kind of love at least once in their life.

    1. [ ja.]

      That’s all we can hope for.

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