ELUSiVE MOMENTS
NEBULOUSLY DRiFTiNG, SEE
FOR A WONDER LOST

HER FINGERS TRACE MY FOREARM
AND EVERYTHING STOPS MOVING

SiZZLiNG HEARTFELT LiNE
DREAMED WHiSPERED EXHALATiON
SHiVERS RACiNG TiME

COOL BREEZE FiNDS BARE SKIN
SLIPS BENEATH SWEAT-SOAKED FABRIC 
COOLING BUILT-UP HEAT

TEMPTATiON'S HEAVY iN THE AiR
LiCK, WHAT ARE YOU WAiTiNG FOR

RIDES CHURN IN SUN'S GLARE
MELTING ICE CREAM STREAKS HIS WRIST
MUCH DETERMiNED TASTER

This rengay was written together with David.

Davids parts are the second, fourth and sixth verses. See more of Davids writing by following this link.

your opinion?

i'm curious.