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Breiter Sandstrand mit schmalem Wasserstreifen und hellblauen Himmel mit weißer Wolke.
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HOMECOMiNG

WANDERiNG

WiTH SAND iN HAND
ALONG MiRROR-SURFACED SEA
WHiLE STORM CLOUDS BREW
BEiNG ONE iN STARRY SKY

OPENED UP
COOLED DOWN
DREAMED ON

HOMECOMiNG
WANDERiNG

GONE
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  1. ben Alexander

    hi, Svenja 💗

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our amazing Dennis, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/07/30/w3-prompt-170-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Looking forward to it!

  2. lesleyscoble

    Svenja, your poem captures a sense of motion and stillness all at once. Your minimalist phrasing and mirrored structure are clever—they evoke both the vastness of the sea and the intimacy of inner transformation. A quiet, contemplative loop of departure and return—elegantly drawn. I really like this piece. Well done 👏

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you so much for your kind words! I had really so much fun while participating!

      1. lesleyscoble

        I’m so happy to hear this. Thank you so much, Svenja 🤗

  3. Violet Lentz


    I love the idea of being gone- lost within the process of attuning with oneself. So neatly packaged.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you, Violet. 🥰

  4. ben Alexander


    I love the quiet rhythm of this, Svenja—“WITH SAND IN HAND / ALONG MIRROR-SURFACED SEA” feels both grounded and untethered at once.

    There’s something serene and haunting here that really speaks to me.

    ~David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Dear David, thank you so much. It’s astounding how a prompt triggers pictures to surface which were buried deep. I loved this prompt!
      Svenja

      1. ben Alexander

        🤗

      2. lesleyscoble

        I’m so pleased you liked the prompt, Svenja—and I love your clever minimalist poem. 💗

      3. wlknlr.wolkenleer

        💚🥰💚

  5. murisopsis

    Lovely!

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      ❤️💚

  6. tenzenmen


    I like the odd rhymes with this little poem. 👏

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you! 🥰

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