ALL WAS BRiGHT AND GOOD
BUT THEN -
NO ONE COULD ADUMBRATE WHAT CAUSED THE MATTER
ALL WAS RiGHT AND GOOD
SUDDENLY, THE MOOD EXTREMLEY CHANGED
MAYBE THE CAUSE LAY iN THE WETTER
ALL WAS BRiGHT AND GOOD
BUT THEN -

HERE ARE THE PiECES WHiCH MAKE THiS RONDEL TO AN ALMOST POEM:

• A RONDEL HAS 8 LiNES, THE FiRST, FORTH AND SEVENTH ARE THE SAME AS WELL AS THE SECOND AND THE EiGHTH – HERE THE FORTH LiNE DiFFER FROM THE FiRST AND EiGHTH
• MOSTLY A RONDEL HAS NO RHYMES – HERE iS ONE RHYME
• THE RHYME WORDS ARE MATTER AND WETTER – WETTER iSN’T ENGLiSH (WETTER iS THE GERMAN WORD FOR WEATHER)

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your opinion?

i'm curious.