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FREDERiK SHOOTiNGSTAR

FLiBBERTY-GLUGGiTY
FREDERiK SHOOTiNGSTAR
TRiED REAL HARD, WAS SO FAR
NO SHOT, NO STAR

SHOT BY SHOT, DRUNK HE GOT
iNDEFATiGABLY
HE FOUGHT WARS, LOST ALL STARS
BUT KEPT HiS SCARS
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#138
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i'm curious.
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  2. ben Alexander

    OOPS! I meant „Punam“ – not „Lesley“!

  3. ben Alexander

    hi, Svenja❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our amazing Lesley Scoble, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #139: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy 😁

    Much love,
    David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Hi David, thanks! I’m looking forward to the challenge!

      1. ben Alexander

        *hug*

  4. crazy4yarn2

    Good one!

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Oh thank you! It was quiet a challange for me. But after I did it I’m hooked!

  5. wlknlr.wolkenleer

    Thanks so much! Yes, I had quiet fun with this play of words. And in the end the piece got mire serious than anticipated.

  6. D. Avery @shiftnshake

    I enjoyed your poem; the double meaning of shooting and shot played well with him fighting wars and getting scarred.

  7. lesleyscoble

    I meant to say that Frederick Shootingstar may be a WANNA BE rockstar? Is he?

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Yes, I think he is. 🎸

      1. lesleyscoble

        Yay! Rock on! 🎸

  8. lesleyscoble

    Bravo, Svenja! Absolutely thrilled you did it! Really enjoyable it is too! Flibberty Gubberty is a great piece of nonsense! 👏 I imagine Frederick Shootingstar is a rock star? 🎸😁💕 Thank you for your poem. 🙏

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      I am grateful for the challenge! So thank you!
      And yes, maybe Frederik is a rockstar. Who knows? I think he is one of the lost souls being lonley on Christmas.

      1. lesleyscoble

        💕 🤗

  9. ben Alexander

    Excellent, Svenja – I’m glad you chose to participate :-D

    I assume this character is fictional, right?

    ~David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you so much! And yes, he came to mind as I thought about this challenge. I found it more difficult to apply a real person.

    2. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      And I think he stand for a lot of lonley people who suffer through the holidays.

      1. ben Alexander

        💯