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AGGRAVATiNG TUMBLE

STRUGGLE iNSiDE, NO PLACE TO HiDE
iT'S THERE, FROM BUBBLiNG TO BOiLiNG
SOMETiMES iT'S RATTLiNG, THEN CRACKLiNG
SEEMS QUiET RUDE, NO WAY TO ELUDE

TiME AND TiME AGAiN, CLOSiNG iN
STRUGGLE iNSiDE, NO PLACE TO HiDE
THERE'S NO iDEA HOW TO HANDLE
THiS REAL AGGRAVATiNG TUMBLE

UNTiL THERE iS NO HOLDiNG ON
iT iS CREEPiNG THROUGH SKiN AND BONE
STRUGGLE iNSiDE, NO PLACE TO HiDE
BLAZiNG A TRAiL, NO TiME TO BAiL

EMOTiONS iN ALL FORMS TRANSFORM
iN ART AND WORD OUTSiDE THE NORM 
FiNDiNG THEiR UNiQUE SOLUTiONS
STRUGGLE iNSiDE, NO PLACE TO HiDE
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#122
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  1. ben Alexander

    Hi, Svenja 👋🏻

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Sally, is now live!

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/09/04/w3-prompt-123-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy❣️

    ~David

  2. ben Alexander

    oh, Svenja! your use of internal rhyme and onomatopoeia are so effective… and, personally, I find this piece very, very relatable…

    ~David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Hey David! Thank you so much. Yes, I think, as we are who are writing or creativ in any way, know about this feeling before transformation can happen.

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  4. murisopsis

    Lovely poem!! Indeed the struggle is real!

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you so much. But when the transformation is done we can breath again.

    2. SelmaMartin

      I like how you did this. And all the internal rhyming is amazing. Thanks for sharing S. Bless you, selma

      1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

        Thank you! I’m happy you like it!

  5. Stine Writing and Miniatures

    This is perfect for any writer or any artist in fact!

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you! I’m happy to hear it isn’t just me! 😉

  6. brazannemuse

    Inspiration really does strike anywhere and everywhere 😊 and those internal struggles we carry, pour out and transform. I could feel the processes tumbling through the stanzas
    in your unravelling quatern – nicely done

    💞Suzanne

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you, Suzanne!
      Yes, I think every creativ person knows this struggle. And everytime it srikes anew it is a bit tiring. And then the transformation hits!