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OCEAN’S SWELL

FEELiNG THEiR ROLLiNG STRENGTH 
SWEEP THROUGH SKiN AND BONES 
iNDEFATiGABLE 

iNTERNALiZiNG THEiR SWELLiNG RHYTHM 
MAGNETiC iN THEiR CONTiNUED UP AND DOWN 
iRRESiSTiBLE 
iNDEFATiGABLE 

LiGHT BREAKS UPON ROUGH SURFACES 
BRiLLiANTLY GLEAMiNG WiTH HiDDEN PROMiSES 
ENTiCiNG 
iRRESiSTiBLE 
iNDEFATiGABLE 

THEiR RECURRiNG SWOOSH SO SOOTHiNGLY 
GENTLY SWAYiNG THEiR WAY DEEP iNTO FOREiGN DREAMS 
SETTLiNG 
ENTiCiNG 
iRRESiSTiBLE 
iNDEFATiGABLE 

WAVE UPON WAVE UNiTiNG FORCE, UPROAR AND FREEDOM 
SEEPiNG THROUGH BODY, BLOOD AND SOUL 
iNSiSTENT 
SETTLiNG 
ENTiCiNG 
iRRESiSTiBLE 
iNDEFATiGABLE
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  2. ben Alexander

    Svenja… I -love- and I do mean -love- how you’ve essentially created your own poetic form. This way of repeating words is something that I shall try to play with… It’s really, really special

    ~David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      David (please forgive my mistake), your comment leaves me speechless. Thank you so much. I’m honoured.
      Svenja

      1. ben Alexander

        my pleasure❣️

        BTW, please feel free to call me ‚David‘ because that’s my first name.

        The word ‚ben‘ simply means ’son of‘ in Hebrew, and my father’s name was ‚Alexander’… I created my blog in his memory, you see…

        I know it’s super confusing because ‚Ben‘ is also a very popular name in English. I’m sorry about the confusion! 🙈

        Much love,
        David

      2. wlknlr.wolkenleer

        Oh, I’m sorry. I read it in your blog but I didn’t internalize that because in German it isn’t common to address someone in their fathers name despite it is a really moving way to pay respect. I will correct my answer and I’m honoured to use your name for future references. Please know my mistake wasn’t intentionel and certainly not as a form of disrespect. Thank you for letting me know. Have a good day David
        Best regards Svenja

      3. ben Alexander

        Svenja – don’t worry about it at all!!

        A trillion people have made exactly the same mistake (I counted!) – it’s totally a logical assumption! 😁

        ~David

  3. brazannemuse

    You are welcome 😊

  4. brazannemuse

    I enjoyed the form of your poem, the swelling of the stanzas as we move through, adding to the impact of your repeat and alliteration, along with your use of CAPiTALS except for i – /iNTERNALiZING THEiR SWELLiNG RHYTHM/ – a poem with many hidden messages, deep …. thank you

    💞Suzanne

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Oh, thank you so much! I’m blushing. Your kind words mean a lot. Thanks for reading and taking the time to commenting.