WOUND TiGHT iNSiDE SUMMER'S BLiSTERiNG HEAT
SUNRAYS LOST THEiR SHADOWS, GLOWiNG HEAT
FRAGMENTED LAYERS SHiFTiNG
SEEKiNG KNOWLEDGE iN FORGOTTEN, LiBERATiNG HEAT
TOUCHED DEEP DOWN UNSPOKEN
WORDS WAKE, BiNDiNG, SCORCHiNG HEAT
NEW iMPULSiONS BORN AS WEiRD SHAPES
UNRULY THOUGHTS FLASH BY LiKE DEEP RED FLEETiNG HEAT
WAFTiNG DENS THROUGH BLiNDING FOGS
GENERATiNG NAMELESS, iNFURiATiNG HEAT
FOREiGN CRAViNGS iTCHED AND DRiVEN
SALACiOUSNESS, HOMESTEAD, WELCOMiNG HEAT
UNRECOGNiZED DESiRES PEALED AWAY
SVENJA'S HEARTBEATS DRONiNG HEAT
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
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your opinion?
i'm curious.
10 Antworten
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hi, Svenja 💗
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Violet Lentz, is now live:
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
Svenja, your repeating “heat” really builds an intensity that feels almost hypnotic to me.
I really like how each stanza shifts the kind of heat we’re feeling, from blistering to liberating to infuriating.
Much love,
David
💚 Thank you so much, David! I’m happy you like it!
There’s a lot going on in this poem. You allude to so many variations of heat. The heat today feels even more relentless now! Cool.
🥰🤭Thank you!💚
Great poem!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Thank you so much! 💚
We deal with so many flavors of heat in this life. Very nicely done.
Thank you, Violet. 🥰