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KNOWiNG BLACKNESS

WANDERiNG FORLORN iN THE POURiNG RAiN
WATERY PUDDLES HAVE iMPRiSONED LiGHT 
POiSON CREEPS THROUGH VEiNS: TAKE FiGHT
HOPELESS MADNESS, ACHiNG PAiN


GONE ASTRAY WiTH MiGHT AND MAiN
HOPE TOOK FLiGHT, HAS LEFT
KNOWiNG BLACKNESS SPREADS, TAKiNG STAND, BEREFT
DREAD FACiNG WHAT SURELY HAS BEEN SLAiN


CiRCLiNG THOUGHTS ARE QUiET iN VAiN
MOURNFUL ECHOS LEADiNG STEPS TO FALTER 
ONE LAST WiSH, THEN ALTER
BLOOD RED STRiKES, iNSANE


TUMBLiNG DOWN THE DRAiN
LONESOMENESS LiES STiLL iN FREEDOM
WATERY PUDDLES SWALLOW LUST AND BOREDOM
UNFORSEEABLE WHAT TOMORROW MAY GROW AND GAiN
This poem was inspired by the instrumental guitar track 'CANCiÓN TRiSTE' von JESSE COOK.
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  1. ben Alexander

    hi, Svenja❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Indira, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #188: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Much love,
    David

  2. ben Alexander

    Svenja, this hits with such stormy intensity. I think the puddles and light give it a haunting rhythm that really echoes the mood of Canción Triste.

    Much love,
    David

    1. [ ja.]

      David, thank you so much for your kind words. I really liked this prompt and the sound of this unique piece of music. 🩵

  3. poetisatinta

    I feel you have captured the forlorn feeling of the piece so well Ja ❤️

    1. [ ja.]

      Thank you so much! 🩷

      1. poetisatinta

        You are welcome

  4. [ ja.]

    Oh, thank you! I’m really greatfull for your kind words.

  5. Violet Lentz

    You have absolutely captured this piece. Wonderful verse.

  6. PiCTURE|PERFECT 11/25 – [ ja.]

    […] LiGHTS ENTRAPPED GENTLE WATERS JUST TO BE SAFE BLOOMiNG |006 HOT SPELL iN|EMOTiON |006 SOLiST|012 SOLiST|013 SOLiST|014 ATTACK HEAD-ON SOLiST|015 SOLiST|016 COUNTERPART iN|EMOTiON |007 KNOWiNG BLACKNESS […]

  7. murisopsis

    Nicely done!!

    1. [ ja.]

      Thank you 🥰