DiSGUiSED

WOUND TiGHT iNSiDE SUMMER'S BLiSTERiNG HEAT
SUNRAYS LOST THEiR SHADOWS, GLOWiNG HEAT

FRAGMENTED LAYERS SHiFTiNG
SEEKiNG KNOWLEDGE iN FORGOTTEN, LiBERATiNG HEAT

TOUCHED DEEP DOWN UNSPOKEN
WORDS WAKE, BiNDiNG, SCORCHiNG HEAT

NEW iMPULSiONS BORN AS WEiRD SHAPES
UNRULY THOUGHTS FLASH BY LiKE DEEP RED FLEETiNG HEAT

WAFTiNG DENS THROUGH BLiNDING FOGS
GENERATiNG NAMELESS, iNFURiATiNG HEAT

FOREiGN CRAViNGS iTCHED AND DRiVEN
SALACiOUSNESS, HOMESTEAD, WELCOMiNG HEAT

UNRECOGNiZED DESiRES PEALED AWAY
SVENJA'S HEARTBEATS DRONiNG HEAT
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#171

your opinion?
i'm curious.

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  2. ben Alexander

    hi, Svenja 💗

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Violet Lentz, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #172: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

  3. ben Alexander

    Svenja, your repeating “heat” really builds an intensity that feels almost hypnotic to me.

    I really like how each stanza shifts the kind of heat we’re feeling, from blistering to liberating to infuriating.

    Much love,
    David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      💚 Thank you so much, David! I’m happy you like it!

  4. D. Avery @shiftnshake

    There’s a lot going on in this poem. You allude to so many variations of heat. The heat today feels even more relentless now! Cool.  

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      🥰🤭Thank you!💚

  5. yvettemcalleiro

    Great poem!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂

    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you so much! 💚

  6. Violet Lentz

    We deal with so many flavors of heat in this life. Very nicely done.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you, Violet. 🥰