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NAKED AND BARE

AM
CAUTiOUS
i
DON'T LiKE
OPENiNG UP
LAYiNG
BARE
MY HEART
YES, iN MY
EXPERiENCE
TRAMPLiNG ON
TO EASY
NOW
i'LL SEE
TO SUPPORT
MYSELF
TO
GUiDE ME
WELL
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#158
your opinion?
i'm curious.
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  1. ben Alexander

    Svenja, this feels raw and real—“TRAMPLiNG ON / TO EASY“ hit me hardest. I really feel the guarded strength in your voice.

    ~David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      That is really high praise David. Thank you so much.

      1. ben Alexander

        🤗

  2. tenzenmen

    If we don’t take ownership of our weaknesses, others will find them and use them against us.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Sadly this is so true.

  3. Violet Lentz

    I do not like to show weakness either, so I really identified with this poem

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Yes, that is really tough. I know.

  4. murisopsis

    Svenja this one is really good – but I like the nuances in the other one better!

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Yes, I think so, too. This one was the first and I thought I had to try a second one.
      But thank you for responding to both of them. That means a lot!

      1. murisopsis

        🤗🤗