i GOT LUCKY

i GOT LUCKY
WALKiNG DOWN THE STAiRS
i FELL
DiDN'T BREAK MY NECK
OR ANY LiMB AS ONE OR PAiRS

i GOT LUCKY
JUST BRUiSED MY ASS
AND PRiDE
DiDN'T SEE iT COMiNG
WENT DOWN WiTH CLASS

i GOT LUCKY
BEND OUT OF SHAPE
MY PHONE
ABSORBED THE BRUNT
THE OUTCOME: NO NEED FOR TAPE

i GOT LUCKY
NO HEALTH iSSUE RESULTED FROM THE FALL
THANK GOD!
HAD TO REPLACE MY PHONE
THAT'S ALL
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#150

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  2. wlknlr.wolkenleer

    I saw it already! The winner poem is extraordinary! I’m looking forward to this weeks challenge.

  3. ben Alexander

    hi, Svenja 😃

    I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Jaideep, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #151: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

  4. leendadll

    This reminded me of the time I went out front at 3am to look at the rain, slipped, and got wedged against my house… without my phone. It’s a miracle that I didn’t hit my head or get injured, beyond pride. It took about 10 min for me to figure out how to get up.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      I’m happy you got lucky as well!

  5. Sally

    The story of a fall — yes, yes. I could feel it with you — the falling, the relief at nothing serious, the bruising of arse and pride, and the broken phone. Great job with the poem!

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you!

  6. ben Alexander

    Svenja, I can feel your relief in each line—what a close call! I’m so glad to hear you’re okay, even with the bruised pride and phone mishap. 😅📱

    Much love,

    David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you David! Yes, I’m really relieved! And the bruised pride will heal!

      1. ben Alexander

        🤗 🤗 🤗

  7. Violet Lentz

    Thank goodness you are alright. RIP Phone, you served her well…..

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      🤣 Yes, rest in peace!