,
[ ja.]

BLACK|OUT |003

ANYTiME

WHO LiVED UPSTAiRS AND WOULD MAKE A FAST EXiT CLOSE TO MiDNiGHT AFTER HE DiD THE DEED BREAKiNG THE WORLD RECORD AND KEPT THE BED SPRiNGS MOANiNG? 
AN UNUSUAL FRiEND; A GOOD GUY.
HE ONLY WANTS TO ViSiT ONCE A WEEK. DiSRUPTiNG HiS SCHEDULE MAKES THiNGS WORSE. 
HE JUST OPENED THE DOOR.

HE HAD TO GET TO WORK.
SUZANNE BROCKMAN | iNTO THE NiGHT
your opinion?
i'm curious.
[ ja.]
[ ja.]
@ja-art.org@ja-art.org

PAiNTED art WRiTTEN

837 Beiträge
0 Follower

7 Antworten

  1. PiCTURE|PERFECT 03/25 – wlknlr.wolkenleer

    […] |002 TRAUER|FLOWER |012 TWiNS|056 JUST NONETHELESS iN|EMOTiON |003 AN iNCANTATiON LOST ON FLiGHT BLACK|OUT |003 AUS DEM NiCHTS TWiNS|057 CUSSED! i GOT LUCKY AWAKE RENDEVOUZ SALTY BLACK|OUT |004 TWiNS|058 CiRCLES […]

  2. ben Alexander

    Svenja, I love how this blackout poem builds a sense of mystery and tension. The rhythm of the words creates an intriguing, almost suspenseful atmosphere!

    Much love,

    David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you David! 🥰 I like this also a lot.
      BlackOuts are quiet interesting! As you try to find a hidden story you are forced to play with what you have and you learn to let things be unfinished. This forms suspense and curiousity.

  3. murisopsis

    Lovely! Seems the blackout poetry is catching on!!

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you!

  4. Violet Lentz

    I am amazed at the poems that result from these ‚black outs‘ I really have to try one sometime.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      I’m as well! And they are really fun to „compose“.