REALLY, i DiDN'T KNOW THiS FOUR-LETTER THiNG WAS MORE COMPLEX THAN PUTTiNG ON A RiNG UNDER THiS BROKEN FRiENDSHiP'S BURDEN I HAVE TO BOW i REALLY DO NOT KNOW HOW TO HANDLE THiS DiSTRESS LiKE A KiNG NOT A KiNG, A QUEEN, WHATEVER, i FEEL iT STiNG LOVE iS BROKEN, AND i SiNK DEEP DOWN BELOW
MAYBE, FAR AWAY AND WiTH TiME WE WiLL BE READY TO REACH OUT FORGiViNG AND ABLE TO SEE BEHiND THE CRiME HOPEFULLY, WE WiLL LEAVE BEHiND ALL DOUBT AND PATiENCE WiLL LEAD TO A NEWFOUND RHYME, ENTWiNED A CAREFUL APPROACH iS NEEDED — LiGHT, NOT LOUD
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wlknlr.wolkenleer
David, thank you! Yes, it isn’t easy to get back lost trust. To know how much to open up again is quiet the struggle.
ben Alexander
Svenja, I love how you captured the complexity of relationships in this poem—your words really resonate with the struggle and hope for healing!
~David
murisopsis
Nice one!!
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Oh! Thank you!
crazy4yarn2
Great response to the prompt! You capture the negative feelings of friendships and love lost.
wlknlr.wolkenleer
Feeling it firsthand and realising there are really more than one form of love out there was/is a bitter realisation. But hope is so strong, I believe in it.
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David, thank you! Yes, it isn’t easy to get back lost trust. To know how much to open up again is quiet the struggle.
Svenja, I love how you captured the complexity of relationships in this poem—your words really resonate with the struggle and hope for healing!
~David
Nice one!!
Oh! Thank you!
Great response to the prompt! You capture the negative feelings of friendships and love lost.
Feeling it firsthand and realising there are really more than one form of love out there was/is a bitter realisation. But hope is so strong, I believe in it.