NEARNESS

BROWN
GENTLE EYES
OVERLOOKiNG THEiR SURROUNDiNGS
WATCHFUL AND JET PEACEFUL
TRUST

EARS
ALWAYS MOViNG
BEiNG QUiET ATTENTiVE
SiDEWAYS, FORWARD, BACKWARD - REPEAT
TALKATiVE

QUiETNESS
SEEKiNG NEARNESS
NOSTRiLS SO SOFT
ONE MOMENT iN TiME
PEACE

POWERFUL
ANTiCiPATiON HiGH
MOVEMENT JUST RESTRAiNT
RAiNS SLACKED A BiT
UNLEASHED

YEEHAW!
STAMPEDiNG HOOFS
iN STiRRUPS STANDiNG
HEART BEATS WiTH ELATiON
FLYiNG

OUTSiDE
iN NATURE
ON OUR WAY
OVER HiLL AND DALE
SURE-FOOTED

WE
COMPLEMENTiNG SEAMLESSLY
CONSiDERATiON AND RESPECT 
RELYiNG ON EACH OTHER
BONDED

TOGETHER
HAPPY PLACE
GiViNG AND TAKiNG
MiND FREE FROM STRESS
HEALiNG
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#121

your opinion?
i'm curious.

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  2. ben Alexander

    Svenja – I just love how each verse adds to the developing narrative of this piece – each verse is actually a really important facet of the picture that you’ve drawn. It’s wonderful.

    ~David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Dear David, thank you so much! Your kind response means a lot!
      Svenja

  3. SelmaMartin

    Hello wlknlr, thanks for joining in this week. All the poems are worthy of praise. What loveliness everyone shared this week. All winners. I wish I could hear this poem recited in your voice, with your pauses and paced just right so I know for sure when to breathe. I feel we are talking about a horse here. I cannot say I know horses like the poet of this poem does. But I sure enjoy a good nature poem.

    I am drawn strongly to the second to last stanza: „WE

    COMPLEMENTiNG SEAMLESSLY

    CONSiDERATiON AND RESPECT 

    RELYiNG ON EACH OTHER

    BONDED“

    –All our interactions should be like this. So beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing this moment with me.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Hello Selma, thank you so much for your kind and moving response. Thank you for hosting this weeks prompt! Yes, a horse is the center of this poem. To be with horses is my happy place, my favorit place to be.
      Your words means a lot because I was struggling to participate this week.
      And I agree with you, all our interactions should be with respect and consideration.
      With love Svenja from wlknlr.wolkenleer

      1. SelmaMartin

        I’m just so thrilled about the horse. 🐴—your happy place. Thanks for gifting this to me this week. Bless you.