PiCKiNG APART

YOU KNOW?
i'M iN A MOOD
NOT…, JUST KiND OF BLUE
PiCKiNG APART MY FOOD
EVERYTHiNG TASTE… i HAVE NO CLUE
QUALMS PLAGUE ME LiKE AN iMPENDiNG FLOOD
i'M FAiRLY… iT'S NOT THE FLUE

YOU KNOW WHAT?
i'LL HiDE AWAY, iN MY FLUFFY HOOD
YOU DON'T… i HAVE TO STEW
i NEED SiLENCE, NEED TO BE MUTE
WiTH… iT WiLL BE GONE WiTHOUT ADO
NO MORE JUMPiNG THROUGH SOME RANDOM LOOP
AND, AND… WHEN iT'S THROUGH
i'LL TASTE AGAiN MY FAVORiTE FOOD!
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3|WEA'VE WRiTTEN WEEKLY|#118

your opinion?
i'm curious.

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  2. ben Alexander

    Hi, Svenja 👋🏻

    This week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Robbie Cheadle, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/08/07/w3-prompt-119-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      I will!

  3. ben Alexander

    oh, Svenja. First of all – I hope you’re feeling better!

    Secondly, I love your transition from food to deep introspection through poetry. Really excellent, my friend.

    ~David

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      David, thank you.

      There are always ups and downs. Some days it’s hard, others quiet better.
      Poetry helps me to recognize things which are deeply hidden, or even unknown inside.
      And sometimes writing surprises me as it shows me what’s inside. So I try to go with the flow, hoping someday I will be surprised by happy or funny lines.

      So yes, at the moment I’m feeling not so bad.
      And taking part in this world of writing, which your prompts offer, is healing. So thank you. Thank you for responding so kindly and hosting the prompt.

      Svenja

      1. ben Alexander

        It’s healing for me too; I understand

      2. wlknlr.wolkenleer

        🥰

  4. paeansunplugged

    We all have such days. Loved your rhyming. Hope you are feeling better now.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      That’s kind of you! Yes, today is a good one. We have to grab joy and happiness wherever we will find it!
      And thank you for responding!

      1. paeansunplugged

        Good to know today is better. I agree, we certainly have to grab joy with both hands when we find it. My pleasure.

      2. wlknlr.wolkenleer

        🥰

      3. paeansunplugged

        🥰🤗

  5. Stine Writing and Miniatures

    This made me think of when I first got Covid and learned what „having no taste“ really meant.