
RAYS OVER BLUE
ABOVE
THE SKiES PUSHED DOWN ANEW
OVERCLOUDED, DULL THE ViEW
CARRYiNG LEAD WiTH GREAT ADO
GUSTS OF WiND BLOWN THROUGH
WiTHiN THE CANOPY RAYS OVER BLUE
BELOW
WiTHSTANDiNG LiNGERED A UNiQUE HUE
WiTNESS OF WHAT WAS, HiTHERTO
DEPTHS OF BLACK-BLUE DARKNESS WOULD COME TRUE
CHASiNG WAVES, DOOM iN PURSUE
MORE AND MORE, MORE THAN A FEW

your opinion?
i'm curious.
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12 Antworten
hi, Svenja 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that week’s W3, hosted for the first time ever by the amazing Dawn Minott, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/07/03/w3-prompt-114-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
Thanks for thinking of me. I will take a look! I’m looking forward to it!
Have a good day
Svenja
*hug*
Lovely rhyme and images!
Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read and respond!
Love this artwork. „Carrying lead“ and „black-blue darkness“ are spot-on descriptions for a storm
Thank you so much. Art and poetry hand in hand. And the storm will pass through.
oh my goodness, Svenja, your rhyming just sucked me right in… excellent ❤
~David
Thank you David. I’m glad you like it. ☺️
Looking forward to next weeks challange!
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The choppy waves and the rhythm of this poem match so very well! Bravo!
That’s really kind of you. Thanks a lot!