"LET'S PARTY!"
DiD YOU SAY
YOUR EYES ARE BLAND
YOUR SHOULDERS HUNCHED
YOUR DEMEANOUR FAKE
 
THOUGHT YOURSELF SMARTLY
CONViNCED ABOUT YOUR PLAY
YOU HiD YOUR TREMBLiNG HAND
FORCED YOUR LAUGH AND LAUNCHED
BECAUSE iT'S JUST ABOUT THE CAKE
 
YOU AREN'T HALE AND HEARTY
PLEASE BE KiND, DELAY
SEE THE LiNE, WRiTTEN iN THE SAND 
LiFE iS HiGHLY BRANCHED
TAKE YOUR TiME, JUST TAKE
 
AND iF NOTHiNG'S LEFT TO FLAKE
ALL NONSENSE CLEAR, UNCLENCHED
i'LL JOiN YOU iN YOUR SUNSHiNE LAND
WHOLE, WiTH SHiNiNG EYES, YOU SAY 
"LET'S PARTY!"

WEEKEND-WRiTiNG-PROMPT #367

your opinion?

i'm curious.