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iNEXORABLY WEAViNG

OMiNOUS ABSCONDiNG WAVES WiTHiN.
 
RAYS LiKE TiCKLiNG FiNGERTiPS, iNEXORABLY WEAViNG TiNGLiNG HOPE.

THROUGH SHADOWS TWiNKLiNG SOOTHiNGLY.

OMiNOUS ABSCONDiNG WAVES WiTHiN

TAiLiNG OFF. SWAYiNG TiLL FAiTH AND RELiANCE ARE JOiNT iN HOPE.
 
OMiNOUS ABSCONDiNG WAVES WiTHiN?
 
RAYS LiKE TiCKLiNG FiNGERTiPS, iNEXORABLY WEAViNG TiNGLiNG HOPE!
W3 | The Skeptic’s Kaddish
W3 #107
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  1. ben Alexander

    hi, Svenja 👋🏻

    just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Suzanne, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/05/22/w3-prompt-108-weave-written-weekly/

    enjoy 😁

    much love,
    David

  2. lesleyscoble

    I like the rhythm you have in your poem. The repeating lines like the ebb and flow of “absconding waves” 👏

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you so much! And also thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

      1. lesleyscoble

        You are most welcome, wlknir 🙏 🌊

  3. SelmaMartin

    love the melody in this one. And the words, stellar. Thanks for sharing.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      I’m happy you like it! Thanks for taking the time to responding.

  4. memadtwo

    I like the image of weaving. Hope finds its way into the fabric of our lives. (K)

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      And stays there. Giving strength and lending optimism.
      Thank you for responding.

  5. Sadje

    This is a beautiful poem. Hope wins and overcomes despair.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thank you! Yes, that’s it. Hope weaves inside and will use all small cracks to grow.

      1. Sadje

        Absolutely right.

  6. brittabenson

    I like your take on hope, Svenja! I’ve noticed that you didn’t put it into ‚Mr Linky‘ on David’s blog – if you don’t put a link in there, people can’t find your contribution. I had trouble doing this the first time I participated. Just go onto the W3 page and click on the white Mr Linky icon, then put your link in.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      Thanks!
      I tried the link but I couldn’t write in it. I used my phone so maybe it isn’t compatible. I’ll try again.
      Thanks for your explanation. Much apprechiated.

      1. brittabenson

        You can always ask David by commenting on his blog and he’ll talk you through it.

      2. wlknlr.wolkenleer

        It worked. Maybe yesterday was a bad time and my mobile was to tired. 😅

      3. brittabenson

        Perfect!