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WENDEPUNKT

ZUM SEE GEDANKEN WANDERN
TRÄGT MiCH SCHÜTZEND VON HiER FORT
BALLAST GESAMMELLT HiER UND DA 
ZUM SEE GEDANKEN WANDERN 
SCHiCHT UM SCHiCHT SACHT ABGELEGT 
AUFGEATMET, MiT DER ZEiT GEREiFT, ALSBALD BEFREiT 
ZUM SEE GEDANKEN WANDERN 
TRÄGT MiCH SCHÜTZEND VON HiER FORT






your opinion?
i'm curious.
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  2. brittabenson

    Just curious, this looks like it’s been written in a specific form – what’s the name of the form? Love the way ‚gereift‘ and ‚befreit‘ almost rhyme. Also: why is it all capitals? I’m still new to your writing, so I’m trying to figure things out. Hope you don’t mind me asking.

    1. wlknlr.wolkenleer

      I certainly don’t mind!

      The form is called Rondell: 8 Lines, one strophe, normally no rhymes, the first line is also the fourth and seventh line, the second line is also the eighth line.

      The capitals besides the letter „i“ is my quirk. No meaning just a play with the letters and maybe a recognition factor.

      I like that you are really interested. Thank you!

      1. brittabenson

        I like this form. Must try one. Thanks for explaining.